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[Shakespeare's relevant Sonnet 127 is anagrammed into another sonnet inspired by recent events that discusses prejudice - and also contains a provisional visual constraint:]
In the old age black was not counted fair,
Or if it were, it bore not beauty's name;
But now is black beauty's successive heir,
And beauty slandered with a bastard shame:
For since each hand hath put on nature's power,
Fairing the foul with art's false borrow'd face,
Sweet beauty hath no name, no holy bower,
But is profaned, if not lives in disgrace.
Therefore my mistress' brows are raven black,
Her eyes so suited, and they mourners seem
At such who, not born fair, no beauty lack,
Slandering creation with a false esteem:
Yet so they mourn, becoming of their woe,
That every tongue says beauty should look so.
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The Sin of the Forbidden Voice Within
You'd hear the fierce cop was "the only one",
But they don't know you got no other choice.
The mob could echo "I can't breathe", but none
Will think about one inner, awful voice:
It burns as bad as brine; as sly as fleas
In beds at dawn, an urge as crude as rum;
It nips at serfs as well as snobs at ease
Who look at men as bright as you as "dumb".
Yeah, even after screams of angry mothers
Reverberate and beg: "Please act, try more",
We don't look at your faces as our brothers -
But rather fume at crimes as if they're yours.
If we want bliss, alerting is the key
To how we'd redefine humanity.
[The apparent constraint becomes visible once every word beginning with 'a' is highlighted and the image of a pair of handcuffs appears:]
The Sin of the Forbidden Voice Within
You'd hear the fierce cop was "the only one",
But they don't know you got no other choice.
The mob could echo "I can't breathe", but none
Will think about one inner, awful voice:
It burns as bad as brine; as sly as fleas
In beds at dawn, an urge as crude as rum;
It nips at serfs as well as snobs at ease
Who look as men as bright as you as "dumb".
Yeah, even after screams of angry mothers
Reverberate and beg: "Please act, try more",
We don't look at your faces as our brothers -
But rather fume at crimes as if they're yours.
If we want bliss, alerting is the key
To how we'd redefine humanity.
[However, something still seems off about the poem's message... A better word in its penultimate line might improve it without changing the anagram - and it will also break from the constraint, thus breaking the chains:]
The Sin of the Forbidden Voice Within
You'd hear the fierce cop was "the only one",
But they don't know you got no other choice.
The mob could echo "I can't breathe", but none
Will think about one inner, awful voice:
It burns as bad as brine; as sly as fleas
In beds at dawn, an urge as crude as rum;
It nips at serfs as well as snobs at ease
Who look as men as bright as you as "dumb".
Yeah, even after screams of angry mothers
Reverberate and beg: "Please act, try more",
We don't look at your faces as our brothers -
But rather fume at crimes as if they're yours.
If we want bliss, relating is the key
To how we'd redefine humanity.
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